Saturday, 8 February 2014

NOVELS: Opening Lines

 


Opening lines are our way into a novel. The cover may entice us, the blurb may peak our interest, but it is only the opening lines that introduce us to the character, tone, voice and sensibility of the novel as a whole. It will be the hook to snare your reader. Many advocate 'starting with a bang' and I'd do the same, but with a proviso that the bang can be any sort: emotional, physical, literal. A thriller could start with an explosion, while a crime novel can start with a murder, but equally a family saga can start with an arresting image or a shocking scene. If it's a comedy, give 'em your best joke, so they know what they're in for.



When crafting an opening line, it is important not to 'lie' to your reader. Don't give them a false opening where the character is acting out of character, or speaking in a different voice. If it's a serious book, don't start with a joke. If it's a romance, don't start with a killing just because that's the only way you know how to grab a reader. A reader wants to know who they are going to spend the next hundred or so pages with, they want to get a good first impression of their narrator.



Think of it as going on a date: you could start off as a bombastic, enthusiastic individual, but if you're really a serious, dour person then it can give the wrong impression, and your date (the reader in this quickly deteriorating metaphor) may not know what to expect from you. Best to be honest, and start as you mean to go on.


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NOVELS is a series of posts looking at writing long-form stories. Have an aspect of novel writing you'd like to see covered here? Let us know in the comments.

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