Friday, 18 April 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: Ghost Town, by Dan Metcalf


“Do you remember the good old days before the ghost town?”

               “Good old days?” said Beenie, flicking his ring pull into the bushes. I swear he was addicted to that Tizer stuff. “That’s a laugh. Three day weeks, no power, no bin collection. You see better places on the news. Those kids covered in flies are better off than we were.”

               “I don’t reckon they had Tizer.”

               We walked along the train tracks, nettles brushing our legs. We were going to Guildford, but the next train weren’t until Thursday, so we decided to hoof it. Beenie nipped into the bushes for a slash. That’s when I saw it.

               A duffel bag, zipped up with a lock on it. I walked over, didn’t think of what I might be getting into. I smashed the tiny padlock with a stone and unzipped it.

               Three hundred and thirty seven thousand, two hundred and forty –five pounds sterling.

               I didn’t know that then, of course. I just knew I had about twenty seconds before Beenie came back, doing the flies up on his 501s.

               I zipped it up again. Picked it up, threw it into the bushes, and made a note of the number on the marker by the track that said where we were.

               This could change everything.

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